Using verbs, prepositional phrases, adjectives, and adverbs to add details.
Writing task
In class: Limited time writing
(Adopted from: 2008 NTNU English Writing Conetst) If you had a magic digital video that can capture scenes, sounds, fragrance, and other senses input, use this digital video to record a "sensory snapshot" of – the city in which you live – one of your family members
Out class: Draft revise and editing
Electronic file due: 10.p.m., Sunday, April. 5, 2009
Printed version due: Beginning of the class on Monday, April. 6, 2009
A complete package includes:
1. Prewriting sheet + Self-reflection questions
2. First draft
3. Peer review sheet
4. Second draft
5. Self-evaluation sheet
Staple five documents together as a package for Essay#1.
Week 6. Descriptive Essay
Rhetorical Focus
Structures of descriptive essaysWriting Skill:
Revising and EditingLanguage Focus
Using verbs, prepositional phrases, adjectives, and adverbs to add details.Writing task
In class: Limited time writing
(Adopted from: 2008 NTNU English Writing Conetst)
If you had a magic digital video that can capture scenes, sounds, fragrance, and other senses input, use this digital video to record a "sensory snapshot" of
– the city in which you live
– one of your family members
Out class: Draft revise and editing
Electronic file due: 10.p.m., Sunday, April. 5, 2009
Printed version due: Beginning of the class on Monday, April. 6, 2009
A complete package includes:
1. Prewriting sheet + Self-reflection questions
2. First draft
3. Peer review sheet
4. Second draft
5. Self-evaluation sheet
Staple five documents together as a package for Essay#1.